A few of my songs

Some of my old stuff…

mms://wwwstaff.murdoch.edu.au/~bjones/wma/dreamtek.wma

mms://wwwstaff.murdoch.edu.au/~bjones/wma/breathe.wma

Any feed back would really be appreciated…

Think “Breathe” wouldn’t be out of tune on the next Mezzanine de l’Alcazar compilation.  ;D

A real sax would be nice!

I had expected the bass to kick in around :46, but instead it gets into gear too slowly imho. The bassline really drives it from 1:58 on. The 808 style drum sounds a bit too harsh and centered, or maybe that’s because the sound of that wma compression is so horrible  :-/

Maybe you could try some more rythmic variation with the hats?

cheers!

Breathe-

Not too bad buddy… Could do with some more compression on the drums..

Like the sax lead- Funky!!

Keep up the good work!

Cheerz Dudes :smiley: :smiley:

I cannot seem to load the files, are the links still valid?

EEEK!, ur right xcen, they are broken…  I’ll fix when i get home 2day :smiley: