For the basic Sid part schematic understanding it’s a good habit to use a MBHP_SID_V3 schematic from the Sid Module section. It can help to understand the audio path part and the control pin part of the Sid chip. The schematic is the same, I think.
There are a lot of soldered wires - jumpers on the Twinsid main board. If you are used the same layout board you need to check a presence of every jumper - wire , under the ic’s, too. Visually check all solder places on the pcb, not the shorts between the traces,too. To check a non solderable jumpers too.
Supply voltages tests idea are similar to the sammichSID_build_guide_v1_0.zip from page 18, but there are another components layout of course.
To check: right supply voltages for your sids , the right nominal similar capacitors for the sids oscillators on the sid pins1/2 and 3/4.